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Some people say that history has few knweldge, we should not read history .Do you agrre and disagree.

#people #history #knweldge #agrre
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It is
undoutbedly
without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
 true that in
this
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 contemporary era
history
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 has
losted
no longer in your possession or control; unable to be found or recovered
lost
 its value
that is
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 why some individuals opine that to know about past days is wastage of time
.
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Although
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yester
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 years an incidents has not meaning now
,
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,
 we
can be learn
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can learn
 multifarious things
by
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from
this
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. In my ideology, I am in consummate
disccord
lack of agreement or harmony
discord
discard
discarded
 with
this
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 given statement that ancient time is meaningless. Though there are numerous factors that one can go on to enlist put my one of the most important view is that through
this
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peple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 can explore their
experince
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
experiences
 related the past events
.
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.
 Like as how people lived
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,
 in which kind lifestyle they use to live. Earlier people have lack of facilities which they have now. What is more, it has been
forgtton
not noticed inadvertently
forgotten
 by masses that they have their own
cultur
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
cultures
.
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.
Ergo they
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Ergo, they
 are inclining towards
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 culture. In
india
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India, for
India for
for example
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,
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,
 people are following western culture as they do not take an interest in their nation
yester
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 background.
clearly people
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Clearly, people
Clearly people
 should be
thougt
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
taught
 that
history
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 is
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
.
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, as youngsters are connecting with technical era
,
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,
 they do not have time for visiting on
histryical
of or relating to the study of history
historical
 place.If whenever they go
,
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,
 only think that these
place
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places
 are merely for entertainment of them. They do not care
of
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about such a place
about such place
such
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 place
.
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Offspring
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The offspring
 must be benefited by learning
history
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.
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 They can find motivational stories which are based on
bygonetimes
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bygone times
. Which might become
guidline
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the guideline
guideline
a guideline
guidelines
 for them in order to
achiveing
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achieving
achieve
 achieving success.
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,
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,
despit
regardless of, in defiance of
despite
 having some advantages to know regarding old
experinces
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
experience
,
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,
there is certain disadvantage
also
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. In
history
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 too much dates which everyone are not able to learn.
For
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From
 having long lecture
of
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about
on
 it
,
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,
 learners do not choose
such
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suject
the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
subject
. To sum up, the more
back ground
a person's social heritage: previous experience or training
background
 things
of
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about
 their culture
is known
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are known
 by the people
,
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,
the more experience of life blood they would get
.
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Everyone ought
to give respect of
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to give respect to
history
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.If they do so
,
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,
it may not relevant for
them but
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them, but
also
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 for
upcoming future
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the upcoming future
.
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