Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

From the inception of human civilization, we are using the nature of our own cause to enrich our establishment more and more and the nature broke its taciturn mode for the

last

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few centuries with

different form

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different forms

a different form

of calamities. To solve the issues regarding

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, world leaders come up very

often but

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often, but

there

are

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is

always debate on the honest intention of developed countries who are more responsible for

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worse condition.

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, a debate is relevant whether the environmental problem should be solved on a global scale or to deal nationally.

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Firstly we

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Firstly, we

should think about our environment as whole and every part of which can be situated in different countries but are connected to each other. Research says, a significant change in Amazon forest has

specific effect

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a specific effect

in desert in Saudi Arabia.

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, we can say

,

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,

with rising temperature around the world

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

of pollution, Ice of

north pole

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the north pole

is melting and

that is

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raising the sea

level which

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level, which

causes countries located nearby seaside as

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maldives

a group of about 1,200 small coral islands (about 220 inhabited) in the Indian ocean

Maldives

are to be exposed

with

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to

the risk of going under water. For that reason, environmental problems should be dealt

on

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with

cooperation of all countries.

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, Initiatives of solving the environmental issues should be started from home or from

national arena

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the national arena

as that will give more relevant and direct solution to the issue.

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, cities like Delhi and Dhaka are overpopulated and are not being maintained with proper care.

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, the environment of the cities

are becoming

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is becoming

polluted

alarmingly

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alarm

that the sky around these turn

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

black. To solve the issues, the Government of the countries should take required initiatives. In my opinion, environmental issues like carbon emission and rising

temperature which

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temperature, which

have vast and long consequences should be handled on

global scale but

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a global scale, but

a global scale but

issues like planning and maintaining healthy cities within

national barrier

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the national barrier

should be executed

nationally

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nations

.