You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: • Introduce yourself • Say why you are interested in this club • Ask some questions about the club ,facilities, members, costs.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in joining your sports club. I am a 23-year-old student from the Chemistry department at Ideal Degree College which is situated beside your club. I belong to Dhaka city and presently staying at the college hostel where there is no arrangement for any physical activities or sports which made me upset. Since my childhood, I have been very fond of playing and physical activities. In another way, it may be said that I always have been an athletic person. It is my opinion that physical activities are not only important for having good leisure but

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improve fitness.

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why I am really very eager to join your organization

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want to get the full opportunity that will offer many good experiences.

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, I have a dream to see myself as a national-level football player for which I need close mentoring from a club like yours.

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, I need to learn a few important matters about your organisation before attending.

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, it would be helpful for me if I am informed about the admission fee and available sports options.

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, It is required to know the schedule of practice so that I can match it with my college routine. I am looking forward to getting a positive reply from you soon. Yours sincerely John Phillip

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Add a brief closing statement expressing your enthusiasm about the possibility of joining the club.

coherence and cohesion

Consider organizing your paragraphs more distinctly by ensuring each serves a clear purpose (e.g., intro, motivation, questions).

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Your letter has a warm and polite tone, which is appropriate for this context.

coherence and cohesion

You have clearly expressed your reasons for wanting to join the sports club, which adds to the overall effectiveness of your letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

228 words

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