Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by its external appearance. Use specific details and reasons to support your answer.

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Judging physical appearance is an emerging issue. It is said that people should never
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criticize
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a person by its physical look.
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essay will discuss and provide reasons and examples why physical appearance should not be
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judged
. The physical appearance of a person should not be a basis for judgement because looks does not define a person's personality.
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, when applying
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a job, skills and knowledge should be the reference of an employer.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • misleading
  • assumptions
  • competent
  • skilled
  • character
  • values
  • indicators
  • kindness
  • integrity
  • intelligence
  • critical aspects
  • cultural misunderstandings
  • biases
  • circumstances
  • health issues
  • economic conditions
  • personal emergencies
  • fair
  • just
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