Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Introduction

Friendship is one of the most precious blessings of God.

However

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, some would argue that having friends of same thinking is better, others say that a little bit disagreement among friends is productive. Despite the fact that harmony plays an important role in long lasting friendship, I believe that

diverse

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diversity

thinking comes up with novelty of ideas.

Body paragraph 1

On the one hand, like

mindedness

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assures a healthy and prolonged friendly relationship between people. By having a person with similar ideas, people feel comfortable and tend to keep in contact for a long

time which

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time, which

eventually can be seen in the form of friendly relationship.

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, it is observed throughout the world that people of same ideology make strong ties with each other because they reflect themselves from others.

Although

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, having a social circle of same thinking gives a sense of security, I believe that it develops dependency

also

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on others.

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On the other hand

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, different kinds of minds can generate innovative ideas which are imperative to make a breakthrough in every field of life.

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, when people have variety of thinking, they argue with each other and

finally

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can be able to extract

better conclusion

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better conclusions

. Let’s take a recent research on diversity of thinking as an

example which

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example, which

finds that people with different thinking can perform better in any aspect of life than those who have similar thoughts. I

also

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believe that disagreement between closely related people can reflect positive outcomes.

Conclusion

In conclusion, even though

same ideology

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the same ideology

can be resulted as a lifelong friendship, it is more beneficial to have a different opinion in friendship which can lead towards new things.

Therefore

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, on balance, I believe that a variation of thoughts among friends has positive outcomes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

harmonious
stress-free
disagreements
conflicts
reinforce
validate
comforting
reassuring
broaden your understanding
perspectives
challenge intellectually
think critically
personal growth
development
healthy debates
communication skills
mutual respect

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