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Some people think it is alright to spend money for their wants, such as a new car or the latest gadget. Others think it is better to save their money and only buy what they really need. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer

#people #alright #money #car #gadget
When shopping, one of the biggest problems consumers have is whether they should save
money
 for a better product, or purchase on their impulse. As we all being a normal human, we cannot have everything and sometimes, we should choose to save, or to use. F
rom
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Of
the two choices given, I personally agree t
o
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with
the opinion stating about saving
money
.
Firstly
, when buying what you really want, you can decide better, wiser choice. Just following the trend and buying products according to every year, month, new collection, there would be less
time
 to think rationally, resulting regrets.
Additionally
, these latest p
roducts only are
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products are only
popular because they are new. When
time
 passes and new products come out, the item you bought will soon look old-fashioned, making you open your wallet to buy another latest object.
On the other hand
, while saving your budget for your wishlist, you might think if the object y
our
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you're
trying to purchase is “essential” in your life. During long
time
 saving
money
, you would realize what products are worth to buy and what are not, leading to better choice of product.
Thus
, because you saved your
money
 so hard, you obviously wouldn’t want your
money
 to be used unwisely, leading you to do more research on items that are “essential” with low cost.
Furthermore
, buying what one longed for brings great pleasure and delight. Rather than just buying the latest product with little effort and less thinking, there a
re
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is
a higher percentage of the buyer regretting their choice.
However
, when lots of effort and thinking c
ombines
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is combined
with lots of
money
, a person will really feel like they’ve been awarded for their long
time
 and that imagination of
finally
 achieving something they’ve wanted will enable them to work and save even harder.
Also
, because they’ve received a prize, they would be motivated and push themselves harder in their daily lives. My own experience is a very good example of
this
 opinion. I got all As in all subjects, and I gifted myself an expensive w
allet which
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wallet, which
I always dreamt and saved m
y budget for.
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for my budget
This
 feeling of receiving was so good that it encouraged me to work even harder and try to get all A*s!! To conclude, due to these two reasons of overflowing joy and sagacious o
utcomeI
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outcome, I
outcome I
believe that only buying what one really wants is a better opinion.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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