Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following: what you have been doing; what you hope to do before the end of your holiday; say why you like this place.

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Dear Mr. Fujisata, I am writing to you as promised in order to share my holiday at the Tori Gate Exposition. Let me start by telling you which activities I attended, so far. Today, after having a wonderful time at the bonsai competition, I went to the archery area and, to my surprise, the sensei invited me to join her in a free-of-charge class.

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, she even lent me a beautiful traditional bow to take some photos with. Prior to my vacation finishing, I am excited to visit the gardening class and see if I can participate in a beginner's class. As I mentioned previously, I have never had a green thumb, but after today I am feeling confident to give it a try and experience new things.

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, I am hoping to take my first bonsai back home. As to why I am so enthralled, it is because I admire these incredible people and their passion for their craft. Needless to say, their hard work regarding everything they do is something

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going to make me go back home feeling deeply inspired. Thank you again for your services. Yours faithfully, Amanda Lago.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter is well-structured and clear, with each paragraph focusing on a specific aspect of your experience. To improve coherence and cohesion further, consider using more linking words or phrases to smoothly connect ideas between paragraphs.

Task Achievement

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

194 words

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