Some people think that international car-free day will help in reducing fuel usage and air pollutions. Others believe there is an effective alternative to this. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

While many people believe that a day without cars across the world is a helpful way to increase the
air
quality, others are of the opinion that we should adopt other ways to preserve our
environment
and reduce
air
pollution. In
this
essay, I will delve into both views and provide my support for the latter view.   It is evident that
actions
Suggestion
the actions
which reduce the consumption of fossil fuels is good for the
environment
. Nowadays, a large number of people are ready to get back to nature and start caring
about our planet more
Suggestion
more about our planet
. I believe that actions like “a day-off from cars” will bring results, because people have already achieved positive outcomes with a similar initiative called “Earth Hour” during which people turn off electric lights for an hour in order to show their commitment to protect Mother Earth. People are getting more and more informed about the negative impact of
air
pollution on their health and the health of future generations.   Despite knowing that
this
initiative / idea can be helpful, I think it is not enough and preventive measures should be taken more comprehensively involving government support. It has to fund scientific research into eco-friendly products and inventions.  
For example
, Europe is already noticing the beneficial effects on the
environment
after the invention of electric cars.
Although
these vehicles are more expensive than petrol cars, people are buying them to protect our
environment
, especially
air
, from pollution.   To conclude, I believe that an international car-free day can be helpful for our planet and help people aware of the need to protect it. Even so, in my opinion, a better option is to invest in eco-friendly cars that do not consume petrol.

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