Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Some extend of
freedom
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is required to express
artists
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artists'
creativity, whereas many people claim that artists should have complete liberty to articulate their thoughts and notions. In my opinion while
freedom
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in
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of
expression is important, art should be censored if it contains the elements that hurt to
society
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, beliefs and religions. Art is a powerful form of
communication and
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communication, and
artists play a crucial role in the development of our
society
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by novel ideas, opinions and criticisms in the form of pictures, writings, music and films. Artists use their imagination to write novels that later inspire movies, and some science fiction books and movies give new ideas to scientists.
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, artistic
freedom
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helps to criticize new decisions and lead to change by
government
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the government
in a healthy way.
For instance
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, Guemica, a well-known oil painting, painted by Pablo
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prolific and influential Spanish artist who lived in France (1881-1973)
Picasso
, that refers to the city bombed in the Spanish civil war,
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, it becomes an anti war symbol and reminder of
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the tragedies
of war.
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the other hand, a total
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without any restriction is detrimental
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to
society
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. Art can extremely affect
in
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on
people's
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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, in 1997 one music in Turkey, lead to the suicide of three people. Quite
liberty
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liberating
in music lyrics, or movies that contain the harmful
scence
a particular branch of scientific knowledge
science
scene
is not a good idea, because using of some sentences
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as encourage people to drink alcohol or
smoking
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smoke
cigarette could be hurt the young people in
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particular
children. In conclusion, art, as an effective subject in
society
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, should be limited. Censorship of some detrimental things
on
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about
people, in every form of art, is necessary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • creativity
  • freedom of expression
  • innovative
  • ethical considerations
  • societal morals
  • unregulated
  • provoke thought
  • controversy
  • government regulation
  • censorship
  • diverse perspectives
  • artistic expression
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