You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dir Sir,
I'm writing to let you know that I am unhappy about the condition of my current life. As you can see I am a student in
this
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work on a part-time job. Linking Words
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, my Housemate Linking Words
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a lot of problems Correct your spelling
causing
to
me, which make it extremely Change preposition
for
impposible
for me to not complain.
Let me explain How depressed my situation is. Every night I get back Correct your spelling
impossible
Home
from a very long day , The other student I share my room with keep playing a lot of Video games,Enjoy watching Movies with a really High volume whats make it obviously Correct your spelling
home
impposible
for me to take a rest. That even The other students Correct your spelling
impossible
are complain
about. Even though he has some Change the verb form
are complaining
unresponseple
attitudes still,the real problem is that we do not have a well-Correct your spelling
unresponsible
unresponsive
orgenized
arrangement in our dorm.
Would you kindly solve Correct your spelling
organized
this
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,send me or him to another Room ?
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, you can talk with the dorm's security to not let anyone enter the dormLinking Words
,
unless he Remove the comma
apply
have
his student's ID card. Because as you see, Almost Every night we have that kind of All-night noisy parties. I will really appreciate it if all my suggestions are taking in mind.
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Lastly
,Than you for your consideration. I am looking forward to the new Developments.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite