Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison

There are lots of
guilty which
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guilty, which
commit
crime
after than free from jail.
This
essay will discuss the main reasons why has happened and show the foremost effect of the problem. Being poverty and lack of
confidence
are the main reasons that people report their mistakes. Lack of
confidence
is the most important
reasen
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
reasons
rising
that people commit a
crime
. Some criminals after being liberated
reporte
to give an account or representation of in words
report
repeat
their
crime
or they more different crimes, because they haven'
t
enough
confidence
. The researchers think that
this
group of criminals have
lake
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
of
confidence
and personal tendency which are the main causes for
this
group to commit
crime
. As an example, young people suffer from a lack of
confidence
when they want to show themselves they decide to commit
crime
like, robbery or murder. These
day
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days
, people who have
lost
a large number or amount
lots
of financial problems and they don'
t
have enough money to spend daily expenses, so they
have have
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
no choice commit
crime
.
For instance
, there are some
people which
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people, which
they have
poor family environment
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a poor family environment
they are forced to steal for a living, because they don'
t
hve
have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense
have
good experience to work and they haven'
t
to find the right job
.
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.
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crime
and having no source of income are the most important consequence of
this
issue. Having no source of income is a big challenge for
guiltys
. When offender return to society they don'
t
find a job because people can'
t
trust them, so they have to do carry out
crime
.
For example
, there are many people in
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deal
with poverty and they can'
t
afford their cost, so they
choosing
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are choosing
choose
to steal.
Also
, learning different
crime
in prison is
big challenge
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a big challenge
for society and government. Offender after
released
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release
from
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jail, they
jail they
learn more about
crime
each other, because
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good
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the best
place for People who want to be reformed.
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As
an example, our
neighbours
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neighbour's
son was arrested for fruit robbery when the return to
home
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the home
a home
he had learned more tricks about theft. In conclusion, being poor and lack of
confidence
are the main cause and Learning more about
crime
and not having a source of income from the effects.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rehabilitation
  • Reintegrate
  • Social stigma
  • Recidivism
  • Criminal records
  • Ex-offender
  • Associations
  • Comprehensive
  • Workforce
  • Mentoring
  • Incentivize
  • Stigmatize
  • Subsidies
  • Legitimate
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