Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

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Developed countries have been, for the

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few decades, helping

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countries that are experiencing a threatening hunger crisis, and are unable to provide high standard educational systems to their citizens.

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is not enough to fulf

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put in effect

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needs of those countries in need, which countries continue to supply the undeveloped ones with

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, medical supplies and frozen fruits and vegetables. It is, in my opinion, of a pivotal importance to

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increase the amount of aid offered to poor countries, as these forms of assistance are not much of a burden for the western

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and euro

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the 2nd smallest continent (actually a vast peninsula of Eurasia); the British use 'Europe' to refer to all of the continent except the British Isles

Europe

d could definitely benefit them, in the long term. To start with, sending

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to starving countries and teaching their students, are not expensive tasks anymore.

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y countries are short on basic

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supplies other parts of the

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are throwing

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away. ‏ ‏

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year, almost

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of Lebanon’s crops are wasted because of the increased competition in the

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These

etables could be sent to those who need it.

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vel to every single destination in the

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; Transporting

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around the globe is not expensive anymore. Not only helping with

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is cheap, but

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this also applies to

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applies to education. With a large number of faculty spread around cities and towns, it’s very easy to offer some seats to foreigners.

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, prof

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engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

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chers can visit countries with modest schools, And supervise their teaching for a period of time. In the long term, the eighth could go back to which countries.

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, the ideal climate for growing olives is in some parts of the Middle East, which are considered to be poor. if d

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eloped countries gave modern tools and machinery to help with

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type of agriculture,

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they would have a share from the season.

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, teenagers who are invited to study abroad, Mike master the skills they have learned and become valuable to the hosting countries. To conclude, while certain education programs and

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, offered to the

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consist of a slight part of the modern coun

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country's

get, they contribute in making a great change in the

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, and give back to those countries.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

367 words

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Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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expressing my deep love for them and gratitude for the moments we've shared