consumer goods have become the most important part of human lives. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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consumerism
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Consumerism
is social and economic ideology that encourages people to acquire more products and service in on ever increasing
amount
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amounts
. It is incontrovertible fact that the given topic assert that the consumers good have
lot
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lots
of merits for the
humans
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human
beings outweigh the demerits. In
this
essay, I am going to examine
this
question from both points of view.
on
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On
one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing
this
is that the
consumers
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consumer
consumers'
goods are very beneficial for the economic growth and development for the country. It is
also
possible to say that if the people
buy the
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buy, the
more thing in the market and they
pay the
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pay, the
more money on
this
things
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thing
, in
this
way the economy is
boost
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boosted
.
Last
but not least, the consumers good shows the life style of the people and they
live
go away from a place
leave
the better living standard. One good illustrated shows that after
few years
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a few years
people have no more
choices but
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choices, but
now they have lots of things they buy the those things which has
lot
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lots
of features and facilities, in
this
way people show their living standard.
On the other hand
, it is
also
possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that it has some
demrits
a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces
demerits
the people waste the
lot
of money to buy the
counsmers
a person who uses goods or services
consumer
goods whereas
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goods, whereas
, they mostly buy the those things, which is not useful for
person
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people
persons
a person
the person
. A particularly good example here nowadays we saw
lot
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lots
of
adveristement
which influence the people to buy the things like the fair creams, they buy
this
type of products which do not
affectful
producing or capable of producing an intended result or having a striking effect
effectual
on their skin in
this
way, the lost the
lot
of money.
Moreover
, when the new product launch in the market people
throw
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throws
the old things it create the pollution and
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the health
for example
the plastic. As we have seen, there one number of
answer
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answers
to
this
question. On
believe
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believe, however
however
, I trend to believe that the consumer goods has
lot
of advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Furthermore
, It is said that earth can
satisfied
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satisfy
everybody
need but
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need, but
not
everybody
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everybody's
greed.
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