Some people think that private schools have many advantages while others think there have many drawbacks for the community. Discuss both sides and give an opinion

These days, private

schools

are gaining popularity in terms of student choices to study.

While

some argue that private

schools

are considered to have a lot of benefits impact, others claim that it has a damaging effect on society. It is my belief that the advantages of going to private

schools

outweigh its disadvantages for the following reasons. On the one hand, private

schools

have been chosen by students mainly because of the curriculum they are offered. Subjects

such

as specific musical instruments (e.g. guitar and piano) and theatre are not included in most public

schools

,

therefore

these majors could attract many youngsters to choose private

schools

in order to enhance their ability in both academic and non-academic skills.

For example

, one private school in Indonesia has succeeded in making musician because their primary subject is music.

On the other hand

, private

schools

cost much higher fees rather than public

schools

.

For instance

, in Indonesia, private

schools

are excluded from receiving money from the government since it has their own curriculum which is mostly international based. To fund those fees, they have to charge more in the registration fee,

hence

it could lead people to consider public

schools

as

schools

that are only for the rich. In conclusion,

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strongly believe that the learning process offered by private

schools

can promise a successful career for students in the future.

However

, parents have to deal with fees demanded by the school in order to obtain the outstanding result of the student.