It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

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All the school activities can be holistically classified into two major categorizes, curricular and extra or co-curricular activities. The curricular activities are those which are directly related to child's syllabus

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as reading, writing, and appearing for the exam. The co-curricular are those which account for the physical portion

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as sports, competitions, school campings, etc. In

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modern age of extreme digitalisation children have easy access to smartphones which has eventually led to lower their interests in outdoor sports, in general.

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, adding catalyst to already lowered interest, metrics for physical

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are not getting accounted in their mark sheets or year end reports. I believe that giving equal weightage to both studies and physical

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would make students take physical

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as important as their written syllabus.

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to making them aware about physical fitness, students will become healthier and proactive. It is like hitting two targets with the same bullet.

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be a fairer scale of measure as a child, good in sports and not in academics can focus more on sports to balance out his performance in academics, and vice-a-versa. Same goes for, a student good in academics and not in sports. In conclusion, a proportionate syllabus which gives due importance to both studies and physical

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is the way forward.

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way a student will academically as well as physically sound.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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physical health
mental health
compulsory
instill
regular exercise
participation
teamwork
discipline
resilience
academic studies
concentration
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childhood obesity
motor skills
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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

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