You are going to have a party. You would like to invite a friend who lives in a city that is a long way from your home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter   explain why you are having the partydescribe your plans for the partysuggest how your friend can travel to the party and where he / she can stay

It's been
such
a long time since we
last
met . How have you been ? I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to invite you
on
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to
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the party that I have been
palnning
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planning
to host next month . You know what ? Recently, I
graduate
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graduated
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from the medical university with good grades . I complete my
bachelors
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bachelor's
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in dental
sugery
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surgery
. Now, you can call me
official
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an official
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doctor with my name . I have been planning to book a farmhouse which is not far from my house. In
this
farmhouse, there are plenty of options for enjoyment like
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a swimmig
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swimmig
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swimming
pool, BBQ place , 3
rest rooms
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restrooms
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for
guest
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guests
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. In food
along with
BBQ , all the
guest
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guests
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will served with biryani, mutton karahi and kheer in sweet dish.
You
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Your
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wish is
also
considered, feel free to tell me if anything you want to add
on
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apply
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. The most important thing, I forgot to tell you that my elder brother is coming to your city for
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a bussiness
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bussiness
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business
meeting. If you feel easy you can tell me.
Otherwise
, I will send a special cab for you. You can stay with me in my room, for whatever days , you want to stay. I eagerly look forward to hearing from you .
your
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yours
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truly, ahtsham
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task achievement
Be mindful of small grammatical and spelling errors, such as 'palnning' which should be 'planning', and 'bussiness' which should be 'business'. These small mistakes can detract from the overall quality of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Use more cohesive devices to improve the flow of the letter. For example, words like 'Additionally', 'Moreover', or 'On another note' can help make the transitions between paragraphs smoother.
coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly separate different ideas into their own paragraphs to make the content easier to follow. For example, all details about transportation could be in one paragraph, while the details about the party's menu and location could be in another.
task achievement
The letter provides a complete response to the prompt by explaining the reason for the party, describing the plans, and offering travel and accommodation suggestions.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for inviting a close friend, which matches well with the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
The letter includes a greeting and closing, making it clear and well-structured.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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