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: In modern days people are heavily influenced by other cultures. Is this cultural invasion a positive development or a negative development?

#people #cultures #invasion #development
It is true that nowadays the great diversity of cultures
have had
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has had
 countless effects on human.
although
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Although
 there are some drawbacks involved in
this
 trend, the positive development overweight it’s negative results
To begin
 with
,
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,
multi-cultural issues has a far_reaching positive impacts on human life.
it
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It
lay
set down according to a plan
laid
 the groundwork for emergence some effective phenomena which would be beneficial for people.
when
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When
 adapting
with
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to
 any kind of cultural procedures ranging from Asian to American
,
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,
people can live comfortably.
a
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A
 good illustration of
this
 is
globalization which
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globalization, which
 can create proper opportunity for economic prosperity
,
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,
integrity and
optimazition
the act of rendering optimal
optimization
.
this
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This
 in turn will solve economic and political
problrms
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
 beyond recognition and permanently.
Furthermore
,
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,
interaction with people who are living in the different culture
,
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,
is
indispensible part
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an indispensable part
indispensable part
 of our fast-changing and competitive society.
if
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If
relationship
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the relationship
a relationship
 among countries were established
,
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,
an array
af
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 benefits would be
chieved
to gain with effort
achieved
shelved
.
consequently it
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Consequently, it
Consequently it
 can trigger progress and achievements
aming
in the middle of
among
arming
 people particularly students.
for
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For
example students
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example, students
 can learn a lot from foreigners which lead to expand their horizons and can to help
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 a challenge. To conclude
,
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,
the effectiveness of any culture on
people attitude
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the person's attitude
person's attitude
a person's attitude
peoples attitude
 and future life
are
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is
 by no means negligible.
this
 is mainly because has considerable impact on progress and developments

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