There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

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Mobile
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using has become a very common phenomenon and people mostly depend on
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cell
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phone
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for
communication
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. The
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phone
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is probably the most accepted and widely used
communication
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device
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devices
than any other
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device
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of the past time. Though
cell
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phone
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causes many healths related problem as well as social and other
problems but
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problems, but
I can't agree with the idea that it outweighs the benefits. I believe people, from all levels of the society, never accept a technology
that is
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not hugely beneficial. There are many
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Medias but none
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media, but none
media but none
mediums but none
is as efficient and as live as a mobile
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.
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, the recent technological advancement has made the
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something more than a talking
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. With a
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phone
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we can use the Internet, can play games, can store our memory by taking pictures and videos and can instantly share those memories with friends and relatives. And using those
technologies cost
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technologies to cost
us a very little in term of
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phone
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and network providers cost. We can talk to our friends and family members as much as we want because of the low cost of these
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phones and I guess that has increased our social affairs.
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, the
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phone
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communications have helped to raise many small and medium level businesses in all over the world and have engaged a large portion of the population to be employed. Though I agree that, there are lots of adverse effects of using the
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phones. Drivers using
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phones while driving is a common cause of road accidents and overuse of
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phones can cause many diseases, from severe headaches to incurable cancers. The easy access to
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phones has violated our privacy and helped the criminals to be more organised. But I believe that those negative effects can be overcome if all of
we
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us
become a little more cautious and be aware of the negative issues of overuse of
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phone
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using. Since we can't stop using the
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and find and alternative and it is easily possible to reduce the negative effects of
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phone
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using
,
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I strongly opine that
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phone
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is a very useful
device
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to
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for
all of us in spite of its some remediable problems.
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