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Dear

Mrs.

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Ngo, Thank you for assisting us with the registration for Canada Education Fair in

Vietnam

starting

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March 2020.

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the

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great opportunity for us to meet with not only the

prospect

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students and their parents

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apply

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but

also

the local agents in

Vietnam

. Due to the concerns arising from the current 2019-

nCov

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Nov

outbreak, the board of school management has decided to withdraw the school from the above-noted event. The situation in

Vietnam

is under control, and we always wish to attend the event in the near future.

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incident has occurred suddenly

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the beginning of

Lunar

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New Year in

Vietnam

, when all business is closed until January 29, 2020.

As a result

, we were unable to inform you earlier to meet the deadline for

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was

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unable to expect

this

to happen, we hope you can consider

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us the full amount we deposited for the event. If there is any question, please do not hesitate to contact us. Best Regards,

Mon Jan 27 2020

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