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Dear

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Ngo, Thank you for assisting us with the registration for Canada Education Fair in

Vietnam

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starting

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March 2020.

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the

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great opportunity for us to meet with not only the

prospect

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students and their parents

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apply

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but

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the local agents in

Vietnam

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. Due to the concerns arising from the current 2019-

nCov

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Nov

outbreak, the board of school management has decided to withdraw the school from the above-noted event. The situation in

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is under control, and we always wish to attend the event in the near future.

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the beginning of

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New Year in

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, when all business is closed until January 29, 2020.

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, we were unable to inform you earlier to meet the deadline for

refund

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us the full amount we deposited for the event. If there is any question, please do not hesitate to contact us. Best Regards,

Jan 27, 2020

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