In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a wide discussion whether there should have
salaries limit
to prevent some people got extremely high salaries. There are some strong arguments on both sides of Suggestion
a salary limit
salary limit
this
topic which will be discussed and also
my opinion is given in this
essay.
Amount
of salaries could be depended on many factors Suggestion
The amount
such
as level of education, an individual's capabilities
and contribution Suggestion
capability
from
that individual to the Suggestion
of
company
and there should not have limit
for the salaries for the one Suggestion
limits
that
Suggestion
that's
being
the major contribution to the have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
been
company
. For example
, If that person graduate from top schools in the world and have a very strong connections
which could turn to be Suggestion
connection
company
’s strategic partners that would be the strong beneficial to company
which Suggestion
a company
the company
companies
company
could generate much more money than their salaries by the contribution of that individual support with their intelligence and connections. While, the one that got much less salaries, but their contributions are much less than those high-level staff by considering their contributions ,
some of the workAccept space
,
,
even could replace by technology which would cost the Accept space
,
company
less than paying the monthly salaries. Company’s pay structure
should based on the return of those individuals give to the Suggestion
The company’s pay structure
company
in order to balance both employee and company
.
In contrast
, there are some arguments that employees should have the same range of salaries in order to create equality in the company
. By this
approach, could help build the ideal environment in the workplace and less-competitive work environment. There are some organizations that successful by
Suggestion
with
this
salary
structure approach such
as a very big company
,
more than 5,000 employeesAccept space
,
,
with less year on year growth target. By Accept space
,
this
method will help the company
control the overhead budget on employee while the company
can do the sustainable growth.
In conclusion, in the majority of the company
, the salary
structure should be based on the contributions and qualifications of those individuals
employees with no limit to bring out the best while, In some big organization with lower or constant growth target which required to manage a bigger scale could consider the Suggestion
individual
salary
range which help control the costs and management. In my opinion, No-limit salary
range would help create more competitive workplace environment
and attract the talented to work with the Suggestion
a more competitive workplace environment
more competitive workplace environments
company
which could drive company
to grow faster.
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