In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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There is a wide discussion whether there should have

salaries limit

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a salary limit

salary limit

to prevent some people got extremely high salaries. There are some strong arguments on both sides of

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topic which will be discussed and

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my opinion is given in

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essay.

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The amount

of salaries could be depended on many factors

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as level of education, an individual's

capabilities

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capability

and contribution

from

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that individual to the

company

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and there should not have

limit

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limits

for the salaries for the one

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that's

being

have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

been

the major contribution to the

company

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, If that person graduate from top schools in the world and have a very strong

connections

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connection

which could turn to be

company

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’s strategic partners that would be the strong beneficial to

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company

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a company

the company

companies

which

company

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could generate much more money than their salaries by the contribution of that individual support with their intelligence and connections. While, the one that got much less salaries, but their contributions are much less than those high-level staff by considering their contributions

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some of the work

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even could replace by technology which would cost the

company

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less than paying the monthly salaries.

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Company’s pay structure

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The company’s pay structure

should based on the return of those individuals give to the

company

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in order to balance both employee and

company

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, there are some arguments that employees should have the same range of salaries in order to create equality in the

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. By

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approach, could help build the ideal environment in the workplace and less-competitive work environment. There are some organizations that successful

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with

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salary

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structure approach

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as a very big

company

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more than 5,000 employees

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with less year on year growth target. By

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method will help the

company

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control the overhead budget on employee while the

company

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can do the sustainable growth. In conclusion, in the majority of the

company

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, the

salary

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structure should be based on the contributions and qualifications of those

individuals

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individual

employees with no limit to bring out the best while, In some big organization with lower or constant growth target which required to manage a bigger scale could consider the

salary

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range which help control the costs and management. In my opinion, No-limit

salary

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range would help create

more competitive workplace environment

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a more competitive workplace environment

more competitive workplace environments

and attract the talented to work with the

company

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which could drive

company

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to grow faster. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

406 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

incentivize
discrepancy
inequality
social cohesion
equitable distribution
wealth concentration
talent retention
global competitiveness
social unrest
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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Some children spend a long time each day on their smartphones. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries paying for things using mobile phones (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

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You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you want to offer the ticket to your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •say about the concert •say why you are unable to go •inform how your friend can receive the ticket