The use of cell phones (mobile phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

as
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As
the
globlisation
growth to a global or worldwide scale
globalization
globalisation
is
happening we
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happening, we
are going towards the technology dependent
world
. Mobile phone use is being rapidly
incressed
made greater in size or amount or degree
increased
increase
in past few decades. I intend to delve into
advantages
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the advantages
and disadvantages of using cell phones without any self restrictions.
first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
of all, there are
lot
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lots
of advantages of cell phones. As we are progressing in
technological
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a technological world
the technological world
world
, there are new smartphones upcoming
everday
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
. With the help of
it we
Accept comma addition
it, we
are able to communicate with
person
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the person
a person
people
sitting in another country.
for
Suggestion
For
example, we can arrange the international
conferance
a prearranged meeting for consultation or exchange of information or discussion (especially one with a formal agenda)
conference
call with the help of internet connection
avilable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
on our telecommunication device. As
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
name suggests, smartphones are being smarter day by day, and helping us in our occupational problems.
For instance
, in IT sector using applications
such
as Whastapp, telegram, and hike we can create a group of
pepole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
and share work
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being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
doubts on it, and at the
same same
closely similar or comparable in kind or quality or quantity or degree
same
moment you can pass the message to everyone from any corner of the
world
.
Accept space
.
This
resulting
into
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in
creating a
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
work setup, which is
boomig
very lively and profitable
booming
,
Accept space
,
and we all call it as 'Work From Home', which comes up with
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
to
employe
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
employ
employees
employee
as well as to
compny
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the company
company
comply
.
coming
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Coming
to the disadvantages,
this
smart
devices
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device
are
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is
easily
avilable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
in the market at
cheep price
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a cheep price
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
juvenile age group
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the juvenile age group
are aslo using
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is also using
are also using
it
illegaly
in an illegal manner
illegally
. Parents are providing phone to
there
of them or themselves
their
children for the communication
purpsoe
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
purpose
. But, they are taking extra
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
from it by using
apllication
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an application
application
applications
which
are not meant
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is not meant
for
there
of them or themselves
their
age group. As we all know from the news, that PUBG game is taking how many
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
.
govermet
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Govermet
should keep age
restrication
a principle that limits the extent of something
restriction
on it.
Otherwise
,
Accept space
,
our upcoming
genration
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
will have to suffer. To recapitulate,
this
devices
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device
are becoming
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is becoming
our life easier. But, at the same time if we
can not
can not
cannot
keep control on ourself
,
Accept space
,
then
one day machines will be leading our
world
, and human
world
will be in
there
of them or themselves
their
hand
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hands
.
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