A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extend do you agree/ disagree with this option?
In the present era,
while
determining an individual's worth, numerous traditional values Linking Words
such
as charity, kindness, or trust seem less important than wealth and social standing. I agree that luxurious possessions and high status in Linking Words
society
are the basis for valuing a Use synonyms
person
. People think a Use synonyms
person
with high-valued assets can live comfortably and possess power in Use synonyms
society
to be considered worthy.
Nowadays, people prioritize their interests over kindness to celebrate luxury materials. Use synonyms
For instance
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according to
Forbes Magazine, Kylie Jenner, one of the young billion entrepreneurs, has luxury cars, and jewellery Linking Words
however
still total donations account for less than 1% of her total earnings to charity each year. She spends on buying expensive cars and bungalows, setting a bar for others to be financially comfortable. Linking Words
Therefore
, ownership of high-priced virtue rather than kind societal work is considered of high significance in judging a character.
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Moreover
, relations are often based on the status an individual is carrying in Linking Words
society
. Use synonyms
For instance
, surveys show that in India families prefer to marry their sons and daughters to wealthy bureaucrats with fraud or criminal cases rather than an ordinary individual with average income and highly honoured in Linking Words
society
. These things show how Use synonyms
society
makes ethics and moral principles less important in life. Use synonyms
Thus
, an unethical Linking Words
person
tends to be more worthy than an individual possessing moral values.
To summarize, everyone believes that moral standards are no longer used as the basis to judge an individual. Use synonyms
Instead
of owning costly articles Linking Words
along with
the designation of high societal value evaluates a Linking Words
person
as having high net worth.Use synonyms
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