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Nowadays, many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes of this?What are the effects of this on indivuals and on society. 250 words

#people #time #home #effects #indivuals #society
These days an everyday
life
 of a
person
 had changed drastically from past decades as it was before. Previously in
t
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at
he
time
 of our elders the
life
 of an individual was very simple, there was no work load, no
p
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No
ollution, transport system was effective and there was no rush hour during off timings which makes one tired even from travelling
home
 from work. If we talk about fi
nancially,
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finance
finances
even on those days it was affordable for a
person
 to carter his who is only doing a job. But now, a lot has changed as in my region inflation is ef
fecting t
arousing affect
affecting
he everyday
life
 of an individual.th
ere is now big c
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There is now a big
There is now big
o
mpetition which e
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competition, which
veryone has to face in the
life
 as there is no proper merit system is being introduced by the government to fulfil the needs of the citizens. The inflation and economic di
strubance
activity that is a malfunction, intrusion, or interruption
disturbance
also
 plays a vital role in disturbing the
life
 as to fu
lfill t
put in effect
fulfil
he needs of
one h
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of, one
as to do multiple jobs to earn due to
this
 the people try to spend less
time
 at
home
.
This
 action is
effecting t
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affects
is affecting
he
life
 of an in
dividuals a
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individual
s if he spends less
time
 at
home
 he wo
nt b
will not
won't
e able to get so
cialize a
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socialized
nd
also
 will not be able to understand the needs of his family.th
ere w
Suggestion
There
ill
also
 be another effect on the
person
 is that he will have health issues which will
also
 ef
fect h
have an effect upon
affect
is daily
li
fe style.A
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
time
 of will come that
person
 will not be able to perform his skills in the public and society ma
y l
the month following April and preceding June
May
ose a good worker.I believe that a system should be introduced by the la
w makers which s
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law makers, which
lawmakers which
hould ease the citizen in earning pr
oper wage a
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a proper wage
nd fulfil their ne
edsand b
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needs and
ound the citizens in working hours and to have family
time
.
This
 action will help individuals to spend more
time
 at
home
 rather
th
en
conjunction used in comparatives
than
spending the pe
rcious
characterized by feeling or showing fond affection for
precious
time
 in earning.

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