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Some young people are leaving the country side to lives in cities and towns,leaving only old people in the country side. What problems are caused by this issue. What can be done to solve this issue

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Nowadays, more and more youngsters are moving from rural
area
 to urban
area
 for better
carrier
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
 and
job
 opportunities and leaving their old parents in home town.
This
 essay will discuss about cause of
problem
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the problem
 and implementation of solutions to resolve
such
 issues.
In
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To
 begin, youngsters are moving towards cities and towns due to better
job
 opportunities and
high standard
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a high standard
 of education provided by the universities. In
cities there
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cities, there
 are
number
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a number
 of universities which provide
high level
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a high level
 of education over
rural
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a rural area
rural areas
area
. The most common reason to shift towards cities and town is
better carrier opportunity
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a better career opportunity
a better carrier opportunity
 in terms of jobs
,
Accept space
,
 business, standard of living and great facilities which divert their minds towards urban areas. MNC's and many private companies are situated in cities and towns which attract young people to grab
such
job
 opportunities. I personally experienced it when my relatives shifted to
Delhi capital
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Delhi, capital
 of India and the reason for moving toward
city
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the city
 is
high level standard
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a high level standard
 of living and great
carrier
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
 opportunities.
However
, moving from country sides to urban
area
are becoming
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is becoming
major issue
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a major issue
 due to which country side
are left
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is left
 with
old
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older
people which
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people, which
 are facing various problem as
large number
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a large number
 of young people diverting their minds towards cities. Government should provide better education facilities in rural
area
. New act and policies should be implemented which boost the trade and
job
 opportunities in rural areas. Basic facilities
like well constructed
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like a well constructed
 roads, dams, hospitals and well maintained infrastructure etc.
to
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To
 be provided, so that people living in
country side
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the countryside
countryside
 can live a better standard of living. In my opinion,
Government
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the Government
 should implement adequate action by promoting better opportunities for youngsters which lead them to stay with their old parents in home town.

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