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The use of artificial intelligence (AI) in the workplace has become increasingly widespread in recent years. Discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the use of AI in the workplace.

The
use
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 of artificial intellingence in the workplace has been used in recent years and it's a big tool to help
companies
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 and
people
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. The AI is a great advance of Internet but the world is not prepared to
use
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 it well.
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, there are some risks when
companies
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 using AI because they are sharing
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 and sensible
data
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.
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,
people
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 share
data
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 too. So there are some advantages and disadvantages about artificial intelligence. The advantages of using AI are as follows:
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You can save a lot of time in many task,
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: one task where you spend one day or maybe two, the AI can do it in minutes, so the answer is very fast.
Second,
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when you have errors or need to fix something
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 as presentations, pictures or resolve any issue, only you need to show the context and the problem and the artificial intelligence makes some solutions an you choose the best way. The disadvantages about AI are delicated because since the first moment
people
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 are always sharing
information
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 and
data
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such
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 as: personal
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, company
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, pictures and other ones. In fact, all
data
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 is storage and using for answer a other consurmers,
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, your and
companies
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data
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 are filtering around the world.
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 there is a risk of impersonate
people
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 with all stored
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.
To conclude
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, the
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 of artificial intelligence is a good way to help
companies
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 to reduce time of tasks, develop better process and search or avoid issues in the future but, they should have rules or forms to
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 the
data
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 with AI and always check the answers because don't always are correct or need some corrections.

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Try to give specific examples for each point to strengthen your argument and make it more convincing.
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You clearly identified both advantages and disadvantages of AI in the workplace.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a logical flow and covers important points about AI.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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