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do you agree or disagree that children should be banned from playing computer games?

Nowadays, technology is playing an important role in our life especially
computer
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. Actually, a
lot
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 of children use different types of
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 games that may play for a long
time
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. In my opinion, children should not be allowed to play
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 games. I feel
this
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 way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
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 of all,
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 games are addictive a
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,
as a result
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, children spend too much
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 on playing
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 games non
stop. Even
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this game
these games
 parents cannot persuade them to give up these games.
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,
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 affects badly on their level of studying, they could not get high marks or achieve their goals without hard w
orking. As a conseq
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without working hard
uence, their chances in getting better opportunities will be decreased. So, they should pay more attention for their study than spending so much
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 on playing
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 non useful things.
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er, it
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thing
 will prevent them from doing other significant things like: helping their parents, cleaning their rooms and etc.
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, playing
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 games for a long
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 affects children's health, as they just sit and do nothing.
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, children do not do any physical exercises, they just set in front of
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 scree
n and play a pa
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a computer screen
the computer screen
ssive role in
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 games. So, spending a
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 of
time
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 on playing these games, preventing them from doing these necessary activities to be fit.
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, as children stare for a long
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 at
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re
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in
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n span, their eyesig
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the computer screen span
a computer screen span
ht will be affected negatively. To sum up, it is very obvious throughout the previous essay that playing
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 games for a long
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 is wasting
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 and caused a
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 of problems for teenagers. It prevents them from utilizing their
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 efficiently and harms their health.
Therefore
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, children should be banned from playing
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 games and parents should put limits for
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 matter and prevent their children from sitting for a long
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 at
computer
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 screens.

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