scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists? to what extent do you agree?
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believed
believes
technology
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and singersa person whose creative work shows sensitivity and imagination
artists
.
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.
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also
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also
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of our Suggestion
a vital part
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one
group of people in our Suggestion
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think
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thinks
technology
plays
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play
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an important role
for
the entire development of our Suggestion
in
society
.
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.
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can be illustrated by introducing high yielding variety in our agricutural
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agricultural
.
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.
also
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in agricultural system such
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,
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examples
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hand, artists
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this
regard artists and musicians play dynamic roles .
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.
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,
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,
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bestow honor or rewards upon
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