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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by tiny numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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Some languages are facing to extinction because of they are spoken by plenty little communities. To save these languages is an important duty of governments for some people,
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, other belief is a complete waste of
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 to promote saving limiting spoken languages. In my opinion, I believe that every
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 should be live and every community saves their
language
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 heritage, even if
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 cost of more public
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. Today's world is universal and everybody can communicate universal
language
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 easily. Sometimes, local community keeps away from their lands by the time, so they have forgotten their mother tongue.
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, youngest have never learnt these languages in order to live and give it their children.
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, there are some prevention to live these languages, especially the governments should be recovered
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 situation regardless how much cost it. The living languages belong to all humanity, not only local people. I strongly believe that, it is more important than
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 to save endangered languages and every government should be doing something for speaking these languages forever.
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,
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 not worth so much
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 to save these limited
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 in another argument. These people think that, the government should take the
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 more important things rather than cultural importance. I think, the most remarkable thing is cultural heritage which belongs to all humanity.
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, in my country, a fascinating women scientist Muzaffer İlmiye Çığ worked an old
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 and their culture. We have learned her researches not only an old
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, but
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 some mystery of their ages. In conclusion, the limited spoken
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 should be live and save both in their community and the government without thinking about cost. If these cultural ancestry belongs humanity, every person should be save
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 respectively.

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