*Question* You wanted to buy a book from a book store but could not find the book in your city. You want to know if you can get it from the same book store in another city. Write a letter to the manager of the book store. * Explainthe details of the book * Why you need the book * How you would pay for it
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to enquire *(about the availability of a book
at your Lagos outlet.)* ~if I can get the 3rd edition of the motivational book
titled ''Motherhood" from your book
store in Lagos~ . I visited the Ibadan branch to possess it but I was informed of its unavailability because it is a newly released version.
Apparently, Motherhood is a book
written and produced by a Roman Philosopher whose name is Thomas Marian. I read the previous editions and I am in search of the ( *third
* ) ~3rd~ one ( *released last
summer* ) ~that was released last
year summer~ . More so, this
is a 250 pages script which
explicitly Correct pronoun usage
that
uncover
(s) the real happiness, strife and pursuit of a woman under the veil of marriage as described by a friend.
Recently, I interacted with my friend Bola about some of my challenges with nurturing my new baby and managing my job. It has been stiff for me to balance my family life and my career path since I became a mother. Immediately, she recommended Change the verb form
uncovers
this
book
with an assurance that it would reveal how I need to surmount this
thought provoking
problem.
If it is available, I would like to know if I could pay for it through Add a hyphen
thought-provoking
transfer
with my mobile app provided you give me the account details. I would Add an article
a transfer
also
prefer to get it through a waybill to Ibadan so I should include the delivery cost. Kindly update me through my mobile contact on 234818886789.
Thanks in anticipation ( *of* ) ~for~ your prompt reply.
Yours faithfully,
Godo Folakemi.Submitted by godofolakemi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
