Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that the celebrities deserve to be highly paid because they serve the country and represent the country’s culture to the
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. While others believe that there are other professions that should earn high salaries because of what they present. I am of the belief that microbiological scientists, teachers and firefighters should earn more money than entertainers. Both views will be discussed in
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essay. On one hand
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celebrities play an important role in serving the country as they participate in campaigns for dealing with serious problems that faces the
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, they are exposed to psychological pressure due to the absence of privacy which sometimes led to suicide.
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, Dalida was one of the most well-known and successful singers, she had suffered from depression because she was surrounded by many journalists without finding a way to escape from them so she
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example, it is believed that entertainers have their own rights to be paid well.
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, there are many professions which serve the people and the
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as teachers, firefighters and microbiological scientists;
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sector of the
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should earn more money than celebrities. Doctors, pharmacists and biologists spend a
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of time searching and discovering a molecule or a drug which can rescue the
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from a disease. Educators who built the future generation and firefighters who
sacrify
endure the loss of
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themselves to save other peoples' homes should be he highly paid.
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can be witnessed by Doctor Magdy Yacoob who plays a philanthropic role in the medical area; he
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his effort doing heart surgeries for people without any returns.
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why these
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the act of losing or surrendering something as a penalty for a mistake or fault or failure to perform etc.
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should earn better than a sport man, a singer or an actor. In conclusion, the previous points strengthen my opinion that there are professions which are faced with high risk should deserve to be paid well more than entertainers.
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, celebrities receive the payment that they deserve.

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