You live at university accommodation. You found that some valuables were stolen from your room. Write a letter to accommodation manager about this theft. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe what happened • Write what you want from the accommodation manager

Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am an international student of business administration final year at your prestigious university and presently accommodating at a hall of residence on campus.

This

epistle is being written

report

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to report

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the robbery which took place yesterday night around 11’o clock.

Last

night, me and my

roommate

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Iroommate

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, Andrew Lee, were doing rehearsals for the youth festival which is going to

held

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on 7th

march

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March

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, 2020. When we came back around 12P.M, we sensed something fishy. To our utter shock, we realized that some expensive items are not there in the locker and it was broken. The stolen items include golden jewellery that I was supposed to wear on upcoming feasts, $10000 cash and one laptop of

apple

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Apple

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brand. We have put forward

this

theft to the housekeeping department, but they act as ignorant in our case. I solicit you to please look into

this

matter at the earliest. I would appreciate

if

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you could provide assistance in locating our belongings. I think looking into the CCTV footage could give us the evidence of the person who stole these things. I expect you will help me to get my things back as soon as possible and thank you in advance for considering my matter. Yours sincerely, Peter Lee