Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is sometimes seen that tourist attractions, including museums, important historical sites and prominent monuments, impose a higher
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for the overseas travellers than the local people. I do not agree with
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idea and believe that the charges should be exactly the same. From a
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, it might seem logical to charge foreign tourists more to enter a traditional and historical place as most of those monuments and establishments are state-owned and the government fund those from the tax they collect from the local residences. From
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regard, many feel that local residences are already paying a portion of the
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money
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through the tax they pay to the government.
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,
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is a very narrow view and
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arrangement dissatisfies the visiting tourists as many of them find it discriminatory. From a broader view, if more foreign travellers are encouraged to visit nationally important tourist attractions and important historical and cultural place,
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would bring more foreign tourists and
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would ensure more
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the excess of revenues over outlays in a given period of time (including depreciation and other non-cash expenses)
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from the tourism sector.
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, it would help spread the national and cultural importance around the world. From
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perspective
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, collecting some extra
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from the entrance
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is a shortsighted step.
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, happy tourists encourage their immediate friends and family members to visit a country and some tourist attractions. If those tourists get the impression that they are being changed more
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than the local people, they would psychologically feel unhappy and would share their dissatisfaction with others which would mean less foreign tourists. Many
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shrines
and monuments are maintained by the
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it
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collects, and
if the number of visiting
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get decreased, it would be tough for the authority to maintain those important places. From
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perspective
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, having an equal entrance
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has a better impact. To conclude, from a broader
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perspective, having
the same
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fee
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, both for the residence and foreign tourists, to allow the entrance to any nationally and historically important
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place, including
museums, art exhibitions, parks and historical places is more beneficial and I completely agree that the
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should not be different.
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