You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: • say where you think you left papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to request
a
help. Remove the article
apply
Last
week I had
attended a meeting at your hotel and accidentally Unnecessary verb
apply
had
left some important business Unnecessary verb
apply
papers
.
Last
week I attended a business meeting with my partners at work. On August 8th around 10-12 a.m. We have talked about our ideas about business. Then
I forgot to take my papers
and accidentally left them. If I remember correctly we attended meeting
at the top of the hotel and I guess it would not be hard to find.
Add an article
a meeting
the meeting
That
Correct determiner usage
Those
papers
are so important for
me because it was my company's Change preposition
to
papers
. I am afraid that someone else except your staff can find it. Because I have some enemies that
is
trying to Change the verb form
are
stole
those Change the verb
steal
papers
from me. Those papers
are key to my enemies. That's why they are so important.
I would be grateful if you will
try to find and protect them from strangers. If you need some Wrong verb form
would
informations
that can help you find Change the wording
information
pieces of information
papers
easily. I can give some
Correct pronoun usage
you some
informations
. The Change the wording
information
pieces of information
papers
were on
the black folder and I guess I had left them on the couch in the living room. I would really appreciate it if you find them and send them to me.
I look forward to your response and hope that the Change preposition
in
papers
can be safely recovered.
Yours faithfully,
Jumaniyozova JasminaSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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language
Avoid repetition of certain words or phrases to make the letter more concise. For example, repeating 'left' and 'important' closely multiple times can be avoided by using synonyms or restructuring sentences.
task achievement
Consider elaborating a bit more on the exact location or context of where the item might be, as it can make your task clearer. For instance, give more specific details about the area 'at the top of the hotel'.
task achievement
The letter clearly states the purpose for writing and provides detailed information regarding the items left and their importance.
tone
The tone of the letter is appropriate for a formal request and includes polite expressions such as 'I would be grateful' and 'I look forward to your response'.
structure
Each paragraph addresses a specific point, maintaining a clear structure to the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite