most artists earn low salaries and should there receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work

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conclusion, government
an get sm
all a
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spend
mount o
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in a wise manner
wisely
es to th
eir artworks so their
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than somewhere else
are decided to get some
money
from
government
but i'm totally disagree to
this
statement because some artists can get well paid by some organization to their workks so in my point off view the governement should spent
money
to somewhere else
instead
of give to artists firslty thiss essay will be discussed about the
government
should spent their finance to social works
such
as build road
system
for village side and education
system
and health care
system
rather than to spent in artists
secondly
government
can introduce some competition to earn some more
money
in artworks and
also
some professional artists get good salary to their works using social networking in detail the
government
should drained their
money
to health care center which is have less equipment to treat people
then
government
want to spend theor finance in education field
also
because nowadays people have so many problems in health so they need good medicine and equipment to recover from those kind of problems and some people are lived in rural area so they must want good machine and good traavelling
system
for an exmple on of my friend pastaways why because he lived in some village side so they dont have much facilities to help him so
government
want to give some
money
to develop their facilities and education
system
to youngstart but i'm not arguing that
government
want give
money
to artists because some kind of artists can get more
money
because their artwork was more significant and adorable like picasso because his painting was selling upto 2 to 3 laks so it depents on their hardwork so artists can get lots of
money
based on their works eventually
government
will introduce event to encourage artists and givesome small amount of
money
to those artists so they can comeup with new idea so they can aslo sell their artworks to thousand dolloars in world wide market in conclusion
government
want to spent
money
wisly rather than to somewhere else

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