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Some experts believe that it is better for children to Begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary

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traditionally, children have begun studying foreign
languages
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 at secondary school,
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introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.
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been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative outcomes. The obvious argument in its favour is that young children pick up
languages
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 easily than teenagers. Their brains are still programmed to acquire
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their
mother tongue, which facilitates
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 another
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,
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unlike adolescents. they are not inhibited by self-consciousness. The greater
fiexsility
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flexibility
 of the primary timetable allows for more frequent shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach,
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 maintaining learners' enthusiasm and progress. Their command of the
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 in later life will benefit from
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 early exposure,
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 learning other
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subsequently
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 will be easier for them. They may
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 gain a better understanding of other cultures, There are,
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, some disadvantages. Primary school teachers are generalists and may not have the necessary
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 skills themselves. If specialists have to be brought in to deliver these sessions, the flexibility referred to above is diminished. If primary
language
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 teaching is not standardised, secondary schools could be faced with a great variety of levels in different
languages
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 within their Intake, resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains. There is no advantage of enthusiastic primary pupils
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demotivaced
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demotivated
 as soon as they change schools.
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, these issues can be addressed strategically within the policy adopted. Anything which encourages
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 learning benefits society culturally and economically, and early exposure to
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 learning contributes to
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. Young children's innate abilities should be harnessed to make these benefits more achievable.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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