Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.

Over the
last
half-century, the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased dramatically beyond our wildest expectations.
This
change has been driven by the booming breakthrough in science and technology.
This
makes the world seem like a small village and necessitates learning a foreign
language
. The latter
facilities communication
Accept comma addition
facilities, communication
between people and eases the exchange of knowledge and experience.
However
, when to start learning a foreign
language
has been thought to be a contentious issue.
Although
, there are some commentators who advocate that learning a foreign
language
should start at high school. I am strongly inclined towards the view that children should be taught foreign
language
in the elementary schools.
Firstly
, the intellectual abilities of children make it
easy
Suggestion
easier
for them to acquire more than one
language
.
For example
, a recent study conducted in London has shown that children below 7 years could learn a
second
language
four times faster than those above 15 years.
Furthermore
, starting to learn a foreign
language
at a young age allows the student to achieve a higher level of fluency when they become youngster.
Consequently
,
this
gives them better opportunities to study overseas or find good careers in the international organizations.
On the other hand
, a strong argument can be made on the opposite side. Opponents believe that
introduction
Suggestion
the introduction
of a foreign
language
could negatively influence their identity and their speaking of their mother tongue.
For instance
, a recent study published in Egypt has revealed that pupils who studied in international schools that taught English from grade one got lower marks in Arabic compared to their peers who were taught English later. To sum up, it can be clearly seen that the pros of learning a foreign
language
in young age outweigh the cons. I do recommend that the ministry of education involves
foreign
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a foreign language
language
as an integral part of all the elementary schools.
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