The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plans illustrate the changes made to Porth
Harbour
from 2000 to today.
Overall
, the
harbour
has evolved from a basic, functional area into a more developed, tourist-friendly destination, with additional amenities like cafés, shops, and a hotel enhancing the visitor experience. In 2000, Porth
Harbour
was relatively simple, with two car parks: one near the marina for private yachts and another near the fishing boats. Showers and toilets were located near the marina’s car park. The lifeboat station was situated close to the docks,
while
a disused castle stood near the public beach. The area primarily served functional purposes, focusing on maritime activities
such
as fishing and passenger ferries. Today, the
harbour
has been modernized and developed for tourism. As can be seen, the fishing boats and marina (for private yachts) have swapped positions. The car park near the marina is now connected directly to the main road, and an additional shower and toilet area has been added next to it. Cafés and shops have been built near the lifeboat station, and the disused castle has been converted into a hotel, with a new path connecting it to the road, offering more attractions for visitors.
While
the public beach and passenger ferry areas remain the same, the
harbour
now caters more to tourists with upgraded facilities and infrastructure.
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General
Your essay performs very well across all criteria, demonstrating a strong understanding of the task and ability to clearly convey information. To aim for a perfect score, you could consider varying your vocabulary more and possibly adding a sentence or two to summarily highlight the implications of these changes for the local economy or community.
Task Achievement
Clear and comprehensive description of changes, demonstrating a thorough understanding of the task.
Coherence and Cohesion
Logical structure with well-defined introduction and comprehensive details on changes observed.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harbour (or harbor)
  • docks
  • shipping lanes
  • warehouses
  • recreational areas
  • infrastructure
  • additions
  • removals
  • facilities
  • environmental sustainability
  • economic impact
  • local community
  • capacity
  • technological advancements
  • industrial shipping
  • recreational use
  • surrounding infrastructure
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