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ou have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear Linda, Long time no see. How are you doing? I'm writing to tell you that soon I'll be living in your city in Canada. I've been planning to apply for a project manager course at Bristol and Bribol college. I must enrol in the classes before June, since the school years starts on September 1st,
as a result
, I must be prepared weeks before
this
 month. Since 2007, I've been working as a civil engineer in the construction industry, which I believe that it has strong bonds with the course.
Moreover
, after graduating, I launched a small company that forces me to improve my management skills. As you are local and graduated there, I'd like to ask for your help to contact these two educational institutions, so I can find out which of them suits me better, as I've got some financial restrictions. I hope to see you soon.
Best
wishes, Cibele
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