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Influence of human being on the world ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. what are the causes and solutions?

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Human-related activities have infiltrated almost every aspect of the
world
's dynamics, disrupting
environment's
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the environment's
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 flora and fauna by eradicating biodiversity of certain species. It is my contention that
while
 there are solid triggering factors that exacerbate existing conditions, numerous resolutions are
on
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 place to eliminate the shortcomings.
First
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The first
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 and the most important leading cause of
extinction
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the extinction
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 of living beings in many places around the
world
 is
industrialization
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the industrialization
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 of today's
world
.
Furthermore
,
this
 massive trend has compelled many animals to go extinct
due to
 the
high-rates
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high rates
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 of carbon release
to
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into
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 the atmosphere, deforestation and depletion of many natural resources. To
examplify
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exemplify
this
 statement,
construction
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the construction
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 of huge manufacturing factories
have
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brought about
demise
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the demise
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 of occupants of deforested green areas. It goes without saying that over the past century, the agricultural industry has had the most significant impact on the diversity of nature, leading to the extinction of many species.
This
 is followed by the current skyrocketing carbon emissions, which are emitted by large corporations
as a result
 of industrialization. As a contrary measure, Governments can launch conjoined associations to regulate the yielded damage in terms of man-made activities.
For example
, cement associations in the
world
 have
rigiorous
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rigorous
 compliance norms and standards to abide by throughout the entire procedure based on the given assumptions.
Moreover
, activities like hunting and agriculture industries should be limited in time to make all these processes sustainable,
otherwise
, soon we will not have a future to protect. In conclusion, the loss of biodiversity and extinctions are attributed to illegal deforestation and uncontrolled
exploitations
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exploitation
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 of
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 industry.
This
 problem can best be tackled with
establishment
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the establishment
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 of new associations to agree on
same
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the same
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 areas for the
adjutment
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adjustment
.
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