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The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house price in 1989. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are 5 different cities between 1990-2002. During 1990-1995 in New York, USA,
-5
Correct article usage
the -5
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 average percentage change from 1989
prices
Use synonyms
, which is a 5 average
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
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 adjustment in 1996-2002. During 1990-1995 in Madrid, Spain, it is
2
Correct article usage
a 2
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average percentage change from 1989
prices
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
 during 1996-2002, it is a 4 average
percent
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per cent
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 adjustment. During 1990-1995 in Tokyo, Japan, it is
-8
Correct article usage
a -8
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 average percentage change from 1989
prices
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
 during 1996-2002 is
-5
Correct article usage
a -5
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 average
percent
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per cent
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 adjustment. During 1990-1995 in Frankfurt, Germany, it is 3 average rate development from 1989
prices
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while
Linking Words
 1 average proportion difference during 1996-2002.
Lastly
Linking Words
, during 1990-1995 in London, UK, it is
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Correct article usage
an -8
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 average proportion difference from 1989
prices
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
 during 1996-2002 it increases to 12 average proportion difference.
Therefore
Linking Words
, I conclude that London has
the
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had the
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 biggest development in average house
prices
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 since 1989 between 1990-1995 and 1996-2002.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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