Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together . To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion.

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Music
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plays an important role in individual’s life as it works as a stress buster for some people.It is considered by some people that
music
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is a key way to combine various cultures and person who having different ages.In my opinion
,
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it works as mediator and people become more friendly and
increase
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their contact with whom having same interest.
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with
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one important point is that
music
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is liked by all age people and they like to hear it any place. Because of that communication between
young
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younger
and older
increase
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. It creates a harmony between them as they have the same choice.
For Example
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, Indian Garda songs are well known in the entire world. A Person that lives outside India always eager to learn that
garba
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
from you if they know that you are Indian.
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to that, there are possibility that person can
increase
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their contact which helps them in later years of life.
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,
music
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work as stress reliever for all ages and cultural people.Most people use it when they want some refreshment from their work.Even it
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helps when someone is in hospital and suffering from decease
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listening some songs create a positivity in their mind.
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, most adolescents
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likes
to hear an English song and they follow that
singer
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sings
as well.So
,
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they want to know all about their personal life, even if they
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belong
to from different culture and want to attend their concert at any part of the world.
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, it has
also
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increased the tourism sector of the
country
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which helps to
increase
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the
over all
involving only main features
overall
growth of the
country
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. In conclusion, While
music
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is used by all ages people as it work as refreshment, positivity, knowledge of different culture and
increase
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the contact of ones. Government should
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support musical events in
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country
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the country
which helps in
growth
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the growth
of the
country
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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