THE OVERUSE OF NATURAL RESOURSES CAUSE AN ULTIMATE EXHAUST OF THEM.PEOPLE HAVE BEEN USING THEM TO BE IN AWIM OF NEW STYLE SUCH AS MAKING NEW FURNITURE OF RECENT DESIGN. THIS CAUSE HUGE HARM TO THE ENVIRONMENT. THEREFORE, THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD DISCOURAGE PEOPLE THE OVERUSE OF THESE RESOURCES. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU SUPPORT OR OPOSE THE IDEA?

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Nature has abundant of gifts to offer and how they
going
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are going
to be used is depend upon mankind.
Human being
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The human being
is using these resources like wood
,
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,
water
,
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,
fossil fuel and many invaluable products from the start, without even giving a
second
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thought on preserving them in certain ways.
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, here comes the role of governing bodies to take measures so that
this
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reckless
use
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can be restricted. I fully support
this
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idea and in the forthcoming paragraphs going to shed light on
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topic.
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if all, due to globalization, there has been a massive competition among people in every aspect of life. Generally, it is
good
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better
in regard with personal development,
however
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, if it is
just gratification
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a just gratification
of showing off,
then
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it is wrong.
For instance
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, some affluent society members buy new furniture or renovate their whole place to add a new theme or buy a new car and discard the old materials. The wood used to make many furniture come from rare trees. More shocking part is that the elite and highly educated members of the society, wasting in
such
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a way
,
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,
setting a wrong example for other. So, the only possible way for the government is
apply
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applying
high taxes on the
use
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of rare wood products and high rates for the fossil fuels, which
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carb
a horse's bit with an attached chain or strap to check the horse
curb
this
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interest
Furthermore
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, population increase
,
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,
means more
use
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to
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of
resources
.
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.
To meet the demand of everyone, companies are producing cheap products by utilizing exhaustible resources and
then
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chemical manipulating
them resulting
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them, resulting
in non eco -friendly substance,
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polluting the nature’s reservoirs.
Environment
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The environment
saving
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is saving
private organization trying to shun these
industries but
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industries, but
without the support of government, it is not possible.Strict laws
are passed
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were passed
in the past few years in some countries and
use
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of
eco
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Eco
friendly products
are encouraged
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is encouraged
.
Government
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The government
is funding in scientific areas to formulate
plan
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plans
, so that the Mother Earth, can be saved. To recapitulate
,
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,
a nature loving individual or a private organization an only fight in the democratic countries to certain extend but the main regulating laws must be assigned by the governing powers. With the support of ruling parties,
this
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problem can be resolved. Awareness and development of scientific methods
at
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of
for
large scale can only be employed by the government.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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