Last year you went on a holiday with your family. A friend has contacted you about the holiday and asked whether you would recommend it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where you went and how you travelled describe the place and the accommodation suggest why your friend should or should not go on this holiday Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

Dear John, I am delighted to hear that you are planning to

visit

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Bharshini on a holiday trip and needed insight

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month's holiday experience there. I would strongly recommend you to pay a

visit

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there as Bharshini is an apt

place

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to forget your city woes and be in sync with nature. I visited the

place

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last

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month. I planned my

visit

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for three days but prolonged it by an extra week as

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beauty is beyond one's expectations. As it is a village on mountains with no

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motorable

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motor able

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road access, so

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took a bus from Delhi to Tosh, the nearest town. After reaching there, you need to take

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uphill climb of about 15 minutes to reach the village. Accommodations there are modest and at a very low price as

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an off tourist

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and less popular

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then

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its counterpart but is

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return for money. You can consider Shambhu's lodge as the accommodation fee includes both stay and food. Israeli cuisine is one of the

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of Shambhu's in house cafe. So

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highly recommend you to

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the

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before winters as winters are kind of harsh there. Hope to hear from you soon. Love to

family

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. Dave

Thu Jan 30 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

207 words

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