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Life nowadays is generally much more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it.

#life #people #stress
Nowadays people are facing a lot of obstacles, which brings more nerve-racking than in the past. Globalization and the way people live these days and are probably the main reason. Fortunately, there are ways people could do to mitigate the pressures in their
life
.
Life
 was simple in the past because the little of modern technologies and less challenge at work as well as people had less expectation in
life
.
However
, globalization and the fast-paced lifestyle have recently developed and they bring up more stressful for human being. That said due to the globalization people have chances to know more about the world
such
 as cultures, languages and new technologies. If one wants to be immersed in the global world, he has to strive his best to achieve those, and that make him become irritated and exhausted. Another reason is the way people are living these days.
This
 could include the challenge at work which make them work overtime and has no time for themselves and their families.
As a result
, they suffer more and more because they do not have enough time to relax or recharge energy. Luckily, there are many resolutions that people could take to tackle
this
 issue.
First
, they could put less expectation for their
life
,
such
 as
instead
 of working harder to become the top of the organization, they could choose not getting to the top, so they would bear less responsibility and get less headache.
Second
, they could choose to cut off their time and money on chasing modern lifestyles to feel being enough and that could ease their lives from frustration. To sum up,
life
 in the past is much
easier
Suggestion
easing
 because of certain reasons and people could choose the
life
 they want to avoid stressful situation in modern
life
 these days.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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