Difference between countries is becoming less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share some fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, differences between
nation
's are decreasing because of the globalization. People around the world started adapting cultures of other countries
such
as advertisements, vivid brands, fashions, different cuisines and TV channel. The benefits are
diffinitely
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
more than
disadvantages
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the disadvantages
. Among
numerous reasons
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the numerous reasons
of merits the main advantage is learning different language. People can become multi-lingual. Because of
this
whenever people will travel to that
country
they will not find trouble to communicate with
nation
's native.
Furthermore
, it can be beneficial for gaining knowledge as well. People will understand news and
sop
a cleansing agent made from the salts of vegetable or animal fats
soap
-operas easily as they will become friendly with their culture.
Moreover
, people can try different cuisines in their
nation
.
Also
, they can learn or try to make different food from the internet just by sitting at home.
For instance
, if
person
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a person
wants to participate in food competition internationally or wants to be chef it would help them to make cuisines of other
country
. As
coin
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a coin
has two
side
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sides
, there
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
also
som
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
drawbacks but
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drawbacks, but
the main disadvantage is economy of
nation
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the nation
a nation
nations
. As different
country
's currency has different rates, underdeveloped
country
might face financial problem because of the import and exports.
On the other hand
,
culture
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the culture
of the
nation
would be in
loss
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a loss
the loss
because it will get common around the globe and people will not pay to see their culture when they will travel to that particular
nation
. To
concluse
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
, it can clearly
seen
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see
that the impact of sharing things around the globe is beneficial for
country
and their people.
Although
it has some
drawbacks but
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drawbacks, but
that can be
solve
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solved
if
nation
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the nation
a nation
nations
would try.
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