In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

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When it comes to

food

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there are many options to choose from and they have

vast inclination

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a vast inclination

towards the consumption of

food

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from other countries.

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However majority

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However, majority

of the people tend to opt for

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that is

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exported from other areas than buying the

food

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that is

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processed locally. Certainly there are many driving forces behind

this

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some of them are

curiosity

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curious

to try out international cuisines and affordable cost. There are many things that can be done to promote the locally produced

food

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items

such

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as eliminating

food

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taxes and organizing competitions to promote chemical free local items. The essay will discuss the forth points said

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With regards to the internationally processed

food

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there are many reasons why people tend to buy these

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items.

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Firstly due

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Firstly, due

to the curiosity of trying out

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from foreign

land people

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land, people

tend

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tends

to get into the venture of buying it.

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the delicacies from

china

a communist nation that covers a vast territory in eastern Asia; the most populous country in the world

China

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Italy and other countries are

much prominently

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much, prominently

and easily available all over the world.

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the international

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items are easily available in nearby supermarkets and

also

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at very affordable rates

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Hence

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due to easy availability and reduced rates people tend to buy these products more. In order to

increase

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the consumption of locally produced

food

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items

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the government can reduce the taxes and local charges applied

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the local

food

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items. According to a survey

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because of reduced

taxes there

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taxes, there

was an

increase

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of 8% in the goods and items of local companies.

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instead

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of having long lasting preserved

food

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which might contain added preservatives

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people could be encouraged to consume healthy and fresh

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which contain less chemicals produced by local vendors.

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the consumption of local

food

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will

increase

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. To conclude

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the people are interested in trying out the continental

food

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because of the easy availability and less cost.

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by reducing

food

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related taxes and other

taxes on

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taxes, on

items plus spreading awareness regarding the healthy

food

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intake can

increase

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the sales of local

food

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companies.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

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novelty
diversity
perception
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globalization
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economic factors
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Due to poorer countries wxperiencing a brain drain they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. what problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this situation?

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