Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer language in the world. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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s considers

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considers

is considered

is considering

that, it is not significant to have a lot of

language

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around the world and only few

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anguage

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languages

is enough to make our life comfortable. I completely disagree with the opinion and I think that, diversified

Language

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is crucial for each and every

nation

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First

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of all,

language

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carries the

culture

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of a particular

nation

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. In order to express the thought and expressions, different countries have its own unique

language

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anguage

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The language

sometimes considered as the most important factor of a

nation

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In other words

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, a

nation

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cannot be formulated without a

language

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. Due to the diversifications of

language

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, countries are unique f

orm

a giver or sender

from

one another.

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, we s

ometime

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

face

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barrier while visiting those countries.

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, we can learn those

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anguage

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languages

and heritage of that country.

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, if a

language

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dies

out, that means the whole

nation

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will be destroyed.

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, in 1971, Pakistan wanted Bangladeshi people not to communicate over Bengali

language

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However

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, the people of Bangladesh never wanted

this

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, they fought for their mother tongue and eventually save the nations from being collapsed.

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, in order to save the ancient heritage and the history of different n

ations we

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nations, we

must have to practice t

hose

plural of "this"

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anguage,

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languages

so that we could discover the hidden meaning of a

nation

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. As the world b

ecoming

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becomes

is becoming

older, we are losing some of the languages of a

ncient period,

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the ancient period

which is a great lost for a

nation

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as well as for the world.

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, scientists are finding the hidden meaning of the ancient Egyptian sign by protecting the

language

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of that

culture

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. To conclude, I strongly believe that, in order to know about a

culture

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and save the history of a

culture

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, diversified

language

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is crucial.

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Fully explain your ideas

In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this? What can be done about this problem?

spending money on the conservation of wildlife animals is a waste of resources. This money would be better spent on other more important things. Do you agree?

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