Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

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of and to present to

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an audience

. It is believed that

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skill should be taught in

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. Why is

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important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it? Communication is mandatory to present or argue your thoughts

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of others and which requires good speaking skills.

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there are many who believes that putting their

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of others or else presenting their views in certain situations are difficult. Some people believe that

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believe that it is necessary to learn certain skills at

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a young age

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, presenting

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the argument

or opinion, individual needs strong speaking capability

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of other people. One of the most important reasons is to show people who are working

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you that you have

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a strong personality

strong personalities

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a presentation

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. If people get

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the proper technique

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period they can increase their confidence.

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, they can never face any problem while giving their opinions to others. Practice makes man perfect same

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way, if

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the person

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the audience

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than later on they can overcome their problem.

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, in all the fields

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as marketing, advertising and many other needs strong capability to speak in

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of big crowd and

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is the time

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when a person needs to

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, to get promotion in certain fields speaking is one of the major skills which can help people to get

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position as well as to encourage them to

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their goals. For an example, being a manager of the company, it’s their responsibility to present their companies in annual

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of many others and which can be

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from their

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

390 words

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Articulate
Oratory
Elocution
Persuasive communication
Rhetorical skills
Eloquence
Confidence
Stage presence
Audience engagement
Non-verbal communication
Public discourse
Persuasion techniques
Presentation skills
Interpersonal skills
Diction
Anxiousness
Introversion
Curriculum integration
Subject mastery
Communication aptitude

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Fully explain your ideas

People today are more concerned with owing material possession than with developing friendships and family relationship. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter: give details of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

SOME PEOPLE THINK THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD PAY FOR HEALTH CARE AND EDUCATION, BUT OTHERS BELIEVE IT IS NOT THE GOVERNMENT’S RESPONSIBILITY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.