Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at school and at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that watching television can be an effective way to teach children, so parents and teachers should encourage them to watch frequently at school and at home. I strongly disagree with
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statement and think that allowing children to spend more time watching
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can lead to a negative
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
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on a child's development and may cause obesity problems.
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is based on the premise that media basically televises insignificant contents. Due to the fact that the media is sponsorship driven, they have to create
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that appeases
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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
sponsors and so some of the
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that is
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produced will not be of any value.
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,
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there are serious issues in the world
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as poverty, conflicts, and global warming, the media generally broadcast unimportant information
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as celebrity gossip and other negative news. In
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way, it can be said that there is a possibility to tell biased news and opinions which can have a negative impact on child growth. These are two reasons for broadcasting unimportant
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on
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. One is that human beings tend to have a sense of superiority by getting exposure to negative information.
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, users will continue to watch
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in order to immerse themselves in a feeling of superiority. The
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reason is that
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companies want to put a lot of stress on people. When people feel frustrated, we tend to consume more.
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, whenever we face a wide variety of frustrating situations, we spend money and time on blowing off steam
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as drinking and shopping. To explain it another way,
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companies aiming to put stress on viewers to boost consumption intention. In conclusion, as parents and teachers, we must give important information for child growth.
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, in my point of view, children can’t learn effectively by watching
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due to the low
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level and
amount
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the amount
of intelligence.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • engaging content
  • language skills
  • pronunciation
  • cultural awareness
  • physical activity
  • obesity
  • eye strain
  • harmful content
  • appropriateness
  • active learning methods
  • group activities
  • practical experiments
  • hands-on experiences
  • retention of knowledge
  • social skills
  • in-person communication
  • social and emotional skills
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