In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyles of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days, in many nations, there are a number of changes in the aspect of eating habits and lifestyles of children
comparing
to past generations. Suggestion
compared
This
phenomenon has exert
detrimental impacts on their health as well as their life. From my perspective, I totally agree with Suggestion
has exerted
this
point of view because of some following reasons.
To begin
with, most children nowadays have less healthy eating habits than in
the past. Suggestion
eating habits than
Firstly
, many youngsters are inclined
to choose fast food Suggestion
is inclined
instead
of home-cooked meals. To be more specific, due to the convenience and time-saving, people can take time for other things such
as taking part in extracurricular activities or playing game rather than prepare a nutritious meal. In addition
, people all know that some Western countries can be considered the heavens of fast food stores such
as KFC, Mc’Donald, etc.... with
Suggestion
With
low price
and tasty food whose attractive advertisements can easily affect children. Suggestion
low prices
the low price
a low price
As a result
, children can be overweight which
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overweight, which
leads some
more dangerous diseases Accept comma addition
leads, some
such
as obesity, diabete
, heart disease that have bad impact on their well-being. In comparison, children in the past a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst
diabetes
eat
more vegetable in every meal that can help them to stay in shape and be healthier.
Moving on, the sedentary lifestyle of children these days can lead to myriad negative impacts. Suggestion
ate
First
of all, by spending whole day
at home playing computer games of watching television, many youngsters gradually become lazier to take part in outdoor activities. Specifically, while in Suggestion
the whole day
a whole day
previous generation
, many children went out to play Suggestion
previous generations
a previous generation
the previous generation
traditional folk
games or Accept comma addition
traditional, folk
hepled
their parent with farming, many teenagers in give help or assistance; be of service
helped
this
time are mostly exposed to technical devices and do not have time for outdoor activities. As a consequences
, they are more prone to serious diseases as well as being addicted to video games that can affect their studying. Suggestion
consequence
Furthermore
, the less strict control of parents also contribute
to Suggestion
also contributes
this
issues
. Because of Suggestion
issue
heavy workload
, parents nowadays do not pay much attention to their Suggestion
the heavy workload
children
actions as in the past, when self-discipline as well as health Suggestion
child's
children's
are
the priorities.
In conclusion, the eating habits as well as lifestyles of teenager nowadays are completely different from Suggestion
is
previous generation
. Suggestion
previous generations
the previous generation
This
issues
can lead to a growing pool of negative impacts that people should take into consideration immediately.Suggestion
issue
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